moments have passed
seconds
minutes
since you plunged deep
inside me
and took away
my humanity
now
I lay bloodied
hot flesh on cold tile
my heart eviscerated
thumping heavily
slowly
to a hault.
©2008
No Additives or Preservatives
- denea marcel
- I'm an artist. Both complex and transparent - guess it depends on what you are looking for. Hope you enjoy what you find.
tasty treats
doggie bag
10 comments:
Rushing in with the life support!
"Clear"
"Clear"
I feel a pulse.
"Come on back babygirl...we love you!"
beep beep beep beep beep beep... ;-)
Girl....this has my mind goin' Every Which a Way!
hey capcity! Which way, which way? ;-) thanx for checkn it out!
lol..."don't u die on me Etta Mae...I'll kill ya, ya hear me, i'll kill ya!"
ROFLMBAO miz!
glad you are laughing!
If I wasn't so tired from work, I'd be great. Lots has happened since the last time we talked. Went to Cali last weekend... it was interesting.
Boomchickaboomchickboomchicka! ;-)
You need to enter this in the poetry contest at www.bloggersdelight2write.blogspot.com
You have to do it by tommorrow.
This is good.
wow. thanx rich!
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